Less Is More

One of the things I’ve learned lately is: less is more.

The less wordy you are, the more impact you have. Like this.

The less you tell, the more you reveal.

In their classic book, The Elements of Style, William Strunk Jr. and E.B. White wrote, “Rich, ornate prose is hard to digest, generally unwholesome, and sometimes nauseating.” (How’s that for a sensational sentence?)

My husband, Jonny, has a friend who gives such a long-winded explanation that sometimes, when he’s in the middle of circling and circling with his stories, Jonny tells him, “Just land the plane!”

Get to the point. The worst thing a writer can do is go on and on.

The same holds true when we relate to others. Living our best chapter means not being a verbal spammer. If I give you a suggestion once, that’s fine. If I give you a follow-up reminder, that is OK, too. But if I tell you the same thing for a third time, then I’m becoming a broken record — a nag, a noodge, someone who’s trying to manipulate you to do what I want when I want it. Then you’d stop listening to me after a while.

Sometimes more doesn’t make the most. Less is better. Less is more.


About dianabletter

Diana Bletter is the author of several books, including The Invisible Thread: A Portrait of Jewish American Women (with photographs by Lori Grinker), shortlisted for a National Jewish Book Award. Her novel, A Remarkable Kindness, (HarperCollins) was published in 2015. She is the First Prize Winner of Moment Magazine's 2019 Fiction Contest. Her work has appeared in The New York Times, The Wall Street Journal, Commentary, tabletmag, Glamour, The Forward, The North American Review, Times of Israel, and is a reporter for Israel21C, and many other publications. She is author of Big Up Yourself: It's About Time You Like Being You and The Mom Who Took off On Her Motorcycle, a memoir of her 10,000-mile motorcycle trip to Alaska and back to New York. She lives in a small beach village in Western Galilee, Israel, with her husband and family. She is a member of the local hevra kadisha, the burial circle, and a Muslim-Jewish-Christian-Druze women's group in the nearby town of Akko. And, she likes snowboarding and climbing trees.
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1 Response to Less Is More

  1. Hi Diana,
    I prefer shorter, punchier blog posts…both reading them & delivering them. It’s the type of word used not the number
    be good to yourself

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